Essay · Level 4 · 194 words

What Translation Decides

Original passage © Studio AM, written for Fluency.

A translator is often described as a servant of the original, someone whose success is measured by invisibility. That description is flattering and mostly false. Nothing crosses a language untouched, and the interesting question is not whether something was lost but what the translator agreed to lose.

Consider the ordinary difficulties. Sound is the first casualty: a line that rhymes or falls into a rhythm in one language almost never does so in another, and a translator who saves the rhyme usually pays for it with the sense. Politeness is the second. Some languages mark respect in the grammar itself, in verb endings a speaker cannot avoid choosing, while English must carry the same information in word choice or leave it out. The information does not vanish; it moves, or it evaporates.

So a translation is not a copy but a set of decisions, and each version shows its translator's priorities as clearly as it shows the author's. This is why several translations of one book are not redundant. They are different answers to the same problem, and reading two of them tells you something no single version can: where the original was hard.

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1. What does the essay mainly argue about translation?

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C. A translation is a set of decisions that reveal the translator's priorities.
The final paragraph states it: a translation is not a copy but a set of decisions, and each version shows what its translator chose to protect.

2. According to the essay, what does a translator who saves the rhyme usually pay with?

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A. The sense of the line
'A translator who saves the rhyme usually pays for it with the sense.'

3. Why does the essay say several translations of one book are not redundant?

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D. Read together, they show where the original was difficult.
Different translators protect different things, so comparing versions exposes the places where the original resisted translation.

4. "Sound is the first casualty". A casualty here is

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A. something that is lost or given up
The sentence goes on to describe rhythm and rhyme disappearing, so a casualty is what the translation sacrifices.

Source: Written for Fluency. Original passage © Studio AM, written for Fluency.